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i WILL make you see...
Contributed by
Light_to_your_Darkness
on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 06:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Don't look at me with star filled eyes
that pale blue sin is your demise
the angels tune you wish to sing
pales in the travesty I can bring
"Let loves flicker have its turn"
been there, done that, felt its burn
sit down and I will let you see
what exactly you'll get with me....
Raven tears and bloody wrists
twenty emotions passed in shifts
a fleeting smile rarely stays
a mouth that damns, a heart that prays
A soul of fury built in flames
smooth brown eyes that always blame
a body moving slow towards death
a shredded mind where nothing's left....
Skin that waits as cold as ice
a voice that wraps around me twice
blue eyes gone, replaced by red
anger's good, keep that when I'm dead.
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Re: i WILL make you see...
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 08:06:57 PM AEST
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Brilliant. I can relate to it so well....fantastic write, i loved last verse.....can't wait to read more.
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Re: i WILL make you see...
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 08:28:03 PM AEST
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a shredded mind where nothing's left....
...it can''t be true when you can write like this. |
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Re: i WILL make you see...
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 08:43:28 AM AEST
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great one. it flows so well.
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