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how do I let go
Contributed by
marly
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Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How do I let go of what I've never had
How do I be happy,
you hurt my heart so bad
How do you feel when you rip my love away
How do you feel
when it's me that you betray
How do I deal with pain so nonchalant
when it's only love
that I truly want
How do you take my words with all this pain in my face
How do you push me away
When it's you I want to embrace
So how do I let go of love that's so untrue
How will I get by
without the presence of you
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marly
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2006-09-16 14:21:30]
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Re: how do I let go
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:09:48 PM AEST
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This write really hit me. Your pain and sadness came right through the screen. Nicely written. I hope you find your ray of sunshine.
hugsssss
Michelle |
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Re: how do I let go
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 06:41:47 PM AEST
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| I absolutely agree....there is no denying the emotion in your writing. It's wonderful and good luck in your happiness. |
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Re: how do I let go
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by Drapes on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:40:19 PM AEST
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Perfect.
Style, word choice, feeling, topic, all perfect! |
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