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Winds of Change
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 01:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When the wind blows through the halls of memories…
And the thoughts billow through the hollow trees…
The minds of all begin to fly…
With the ugliness of the darkened sky…
Where every soul has lost direction…
With every thought losing perception…
The winds of change begin to blow…
And take them towards a better flow…
The shadows struggle to find each other…
To learn and grow with one another…
They wouldn’t see until they tried…
To see each other with open eyes…
Their shadows are two yet one…
They try to hide from the summer sun…
Behind the structures of our mind…
Till their love they one day find…
Please Read ever1der's "Two Shadows"
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oneir8dude
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Re: Winds of Change
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by Boobee on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:18:38 PM AEST
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| I like this alot. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Winds of Change
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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awwww...this made me cry. It's not often that a poet hears that he or she has actually inspired another..thank you so much.
I like the pic better than mine..it's' wonderful. |
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Re: Winds of Change
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:39:21 PM AEST
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A lovely write and I know she is pleased well she just posted but I knew she would be.
The picture brings each word to life.
Thanks for sharing this inspiration
Michelle |
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Re: Winds of Change
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:15:58 PM AEST
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ever1der,
The pleasure is all mine... And the thanks goes to you....
I am easily inspired by Great work....
I like your style and the words you use seem like you
gave great thought of them... and they actually rolled
off your mind I am sure....
Thank You
Bill |
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Re: Winds of Change
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 10:45:24 PM AEST
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Loved the pic, Bill. I can see why Mary could inspire you. She is a wonderful poet. This piece was quite nice. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Winds of Change
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by Skillz on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:00:53 AM AEST
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| really nice poem :) |
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