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In our hearts
Contributed by
girish
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Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:15:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Did you see the news for this wonderful day
He`s lost his love and the warmth gone away
Now he will feel colder than the night
Will any rhyme or reasoning make him right
Now he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
My heart, its in him and he will feel
His heart, its in me and he will steal
He looks on for words to speak to me
Love comes round again, and its he
Something should stir his heart today
He will feel to hold me in his arms in gay
Again he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
It is all Love, that we wish to deserve
It is all Love, that I wish to preserve
He will neck me and talk to me all night
Praises and accusations, in the candlelight
Mistakes, misreads and stupid human crashes
Doesn`t matter, for our hearts, that never thrashes
Copyright ©
girish
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2006-09-16 11:15:06]
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Re: In our hearts
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by Alison on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:56:26 AM AEST
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| this has a good flow to it. great write |
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Re: In our hearts
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by Packatack on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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| Nicely written poem u have here...thanks for sharing |
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Re: In our hearts
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:20:20 PM AEST
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Even flowing write with such detail in it. I enjoyed this alot.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: In our hearts
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by little_genna on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 03:58:09 AM AEST
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| the flow works well, i really like this. it conjurs up good images that could potentially have very sad undertones.i like it when i stumble upon talented enough writers to do such things with words..... |
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Re: In our hearts
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 07:17:00 PM AEST
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| Real love really does rock. When you find it you can never let go. When you don't it can even be harder to let go. Thanks for sharing |
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