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Worn Eyes
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I know too many guys like you
After the latest, hardcore beat
the newest chemical buzz
riding a tide of cash
no doubt ill-gotten
with paranoia your biggest foe
Everyone’s your friend
- too cool for them
in your flash clothes
and always out
or coming down
A vehicle on NOS
- it’s gonna wear away quickly
Don’t you see the shadows
- your eyes can’t hide it
not like your big smile
or flash clothes
or dopy laugh
And you bring it all to me
- the insomniac always out -
in my flash clothes
- all bought on sale -
and take me like yourself
without noticing my empty table
- for I have nothing to offer -
without noticing my eyes
- no where near as worn as yours.
9/3/06
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one-curly-fry
... [
2006-09-16 02:39:13]
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Re: Worn Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:54:48 AM AEST
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| A very frash approach to this subject. I like the way you worded it. great job! |
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Re: Worn Eyes
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:25:37 PM AEST
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| From reading most of your poetry thus far..I'ld say you have an incredible amount to offer anyone..I love your poetry. |
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Re: Worn Eyes
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:02:53 AM AEST
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I've been the shoulder for others before now. It's difficult sometimes to know what they need if you haven't gone through the same thing.
Good job |
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