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Like attracts Like
Contributed by
jeje
on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 01:22:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Thinking of you,
I wonder if you think of me.
We haven’t met yet,
And I wonder when it’ll be.
I can’t wait much longer,
I’m longing to meet my mate,
A meeting of two souls,
Colliding and uniting at an overwhelming rate.
Perhaps it’s you,
I don’t know,
You know of me,
but time moves slow.
I see in you things that tell me that you might be it,
I don’t want to think too much,
Experiences like these I have had enough.
This time it needs to happen,
I need someone soon,
But not just anyone,
A mate like the earth is to the moon.
Connected by an invisible force,
Affecting each other,
While the one causes the seas to move in the other,
The other admires and wants to explore her other.
Perhaps it’s not you,
That I must meet,
And this is ok,
Since it may be another one’s orbit mine has to greet.
I keep forgetting,
in space there is no time,
although forces there are,
and thus I will use my mind.
Perhaps you’ll pick up on my frequency,
In case you are the right one for me,
Like attracts like,
And since I am on Earth I will wait and see.
Thus time comes back to me,
I cannot control it much,
A force from the inside,
That in order to maintain its balance needs another crutch.
Now I feel exposed,
but it’s not a crime,
to wonder if this is the love,
and trying to speed up time.
Copyright ©
jeje
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2006-09-15 13:22:54]
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Re: Like attracts Like
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by Harimitsu on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 03:15:53 PM AEST
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| That was very expressional poetry. It was a seed when I began and bloomed brilliantly as I closed at the end. Nothing speaks poetry more then the words of love :) |
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Re: Like attracts Like
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by 3660Days on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 01:37:27 PM AEST
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| the rhyming seems a little forced, other than that, keep up good work, god bless |
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