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When 'Sorry' just doesn't work anymore
Contributed by
Sproglet
on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 11:49:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Messing around
Messing up
Towers fall down
Watching a poor man drown
Eye me with pity
Contemplation and pain
Can't help what I do
This love ain't pretty
You're crying again
Can't stand the sound
Painful to watch
Cracking under the strain
Beauty in your eyes
Guilt in mine
I'm elsewhere
Looking at the sky
Poking and prodding
Goading the pain
I'll keep on doing this
We suffer the same
Copyright ©
Sproglet
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2006-09-15 11:49:16]
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Re: When 'Sorry' just doesn't work anymore
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 12:52:03 PM AEST
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i love it...simply beautiful. short and sweet....but amazing still.
- Bethani - |
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Re: When 'Sorry' just doesn't work anymore
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 11:53:56 AM AEST
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deep little dark poem
i liked it thou
you just keep on writing and guess what
thats right i will be reading lol |
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