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Silver Haze
Contributed by
Mangos
on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 07:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We should have known this was coming
Its been brewing
Its been waiting, anticipating
For its opportunity to leap
Grab us by the throat
And squeeze
Until we both can’t take it anymore
Drop us on the grass
The moist blades taste
Fresh life to graze
A new wall added
To the garden maze
The palace walls
Meant to keep in the slaves
The luscious halls
Echo the squabble of the chambermaids
The castle, that never ceases to amaze
The queen of the empire
Her beauty sets the hearts ablaze
When we were younger
In our yesterdays
Lost in the dank and funk
Of the silver haze
I’ve noticed something about us
Polar opposites
Or borderline schizoids
In manic rays
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Copyright ©
Mangos
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2006-09-15 07:17:34]
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Re: Silver Haze
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by TwistedCage on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 09:39:10 AM AEST
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interesting write...Although, I couldn't help but associate "Silver Haze" with the cannabis sativa plant of the same name...very "Dank", and "funky" lol!
I'm just saying...
Nice one,
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Re: Silver Haze
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 02:12:04 PM AEST
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I liked it
I can't say I associated it with anything but I simply enjoyed it. |
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