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Leaving No Evidence
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 11:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It was there for so long
I thought it was forever
a permanent feature
to disregard with familiarity
and ignore through expectation
A small thing though it was
it stood into the light
refusing to washed away
benign to my fears
simply existing
until I could do nothing
but accept
and that’s when it changed
it came loose
and fell away
leaving no evidence
of an existence
I was forced to accept
leaving nothing good
leaving nothing bad
benign to my fears
benign to me.
7/3/06
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Re: Leaving No Evidence
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by ever1der on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 02:07:43 AM AEST
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| sounds a lot like letting go. |
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Re: Leaving No Evidence
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by Alison on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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| hey i really like it! it is very moving and has a good strong flow to it! good write! |
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Re: Leaving No Evidence
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:39:44 PM AEST
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| the more i read of your poetry the more i realize how very honored we are to have you posting your poetry here.. |
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Re: Leaving No Evidence
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:00:01 AM AEST
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All too often that which we come to rely upon can just disappear. I think you've captured both parts here; the dependence and the uncertainty that follows its loss.
Good job
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Re: Leaving No Evidence
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by elle on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 05:04:50 PM AEST
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I do see the similarities, Tim. Although I like mine, I think I like yours' better. It's subtle.
Now, mine seems so much more graphic. (blood blister & what not. . . )
Nice piece.
~smiles~ elle |
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