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lifetimes

Contributed by BSteel on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

just tryin to lay some tracks,
the white kid from the sticks,
the logistics of extracting the essence of this ****,
simply stated,
angels and demons dan't desecrate nor venerate this holy place,
which lays not above but is clear and naked for all to take it,
they worry western civilization is decaying,
but the pride incorporated when states unite is beyond any human sacrifice,
to be a martry is not as glorious as it was say even ten years ago,
still i know places on earth are a raging inferno, hates breeds jeoulsy and envy or is in inverse,
whatever it may be power breeds arrogance and insecurity, which bleeds out the pores of those struck by the lord,
for they all know that life is at least twofold like a present to unfold, just another stage if your minds rationally engaged,
and your pride kills ignorance with a humble stride only then can the united states and the untied arab leaques collide,
peacefully and siopher off the oil from eastern civilization, wall china back to poverty by exposing it's weakest side,
by exposing where the true messiah lays, in the rising tides blinded by the sun's reflection of the crescent wave,
a place where all the three holiest religions blessed by alien intuition will intermingle to save our ways of living,
peace i hope war i do not hesiatate much love howerver it goes down it is what is let the winners win and the losers lose, gentlemen, from this lifetime till the next.

Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-09-14 19:56:12]
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Re: lifetimes (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 11:35:44 AM AEST
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A goodpoem that speaks truth but some spelling mistakes make for interrupted reading, I almost feel that some sentences are too long but effective still, good stuff

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