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Left With Nothing
Contributed by
drapes
on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am boring,
I am average,
I am nothing special,
I am just another girl.
I've said these words before,
But this time you're not here
To tell me I'm wrong.
The world does not revolve around me.
The world doesn't know I exist.
Heck, you took the world with you
When you left.
I shouldn't of made you it all
Because now I'm left with nothing.
But I never thought you'd leave,
You promised me forever.
I am boring,
I am average,
I am nothing special,
I am just another girl.
You're no loner here
To tell me I'm wrong.
Because you're the one
Proving I'm right.
Copyright ©
drapes
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2006-09-14 16:34:22]
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Re: Left With Nothing
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by moses on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:46:43 PM AEST
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Very well done and said. It got to the point, and you said more than you wrote. I really enjoyed it and this poem proves that you are more than just another girl.
Keep writing,
-moses |
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Re: Left With Nothing
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by Xbxg32000 on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 04:25:27 PM AEST
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The structure of this adds to the point that it wants to get across--and I believe that you were very successful with getting that point across.
I really enjoyed this, the last stanza is a great end to this.
Awesome job. |
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Re: Left With Nothing
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by UrMyInspiration on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:33:56 PM AEST
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| I really like this one... It is how we tend to think after "our everything" is no longer there... Very nicely put. |
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