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I Send
Contributed by
huey
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I send to you a myriad of roses
Gleaming in a crimson hue
Yet they pale in comparison
When wilting next to you
I send to you a triad of daisies
Blooming and lovely too
And yet they frown in comparison
When tearing next to you
I send to you a cherry blossom mountain
So fair and ready new
And yet they flutter in comparison
When shuffling next to you
I send to you a storm of lilies
Graceful and pleasantly blue
Yet they darken in comparison
When drooping next to you
I send to you my world of flowers
And all my words so true
And yet it means nothing at all
Because nothing's as good as you
Copyright ©
huey
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2003-02-13 22:40:00]
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Re: I Send
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:44:30 AM AEST
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Aww.... who ever is the recever of this poem is very lucky this year!
YS |
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Re: I Send
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:04:24 AM AEST
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| Very colourful and beautiful..venkat |
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Re: I Send
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:20:17 PM AEST
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| nice sentiments, but i dont like how you ended it stating "nothing's as good as you", seems trivial, after all the superlatives you used above |
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