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When you left
Contributed by
princessad1975
on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 11:23:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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When you left
When you left,
you said dont worry i will be back....
The days pass one into another
Days to weeks, weeks to months
And your still not here
I long to feel your touch ,
Telling me your near.
I need to hear your voice
Sounding oh so sincere
When you left, I felt so alone
I never knew how hard it would be
To have you go so far away from me.
It wasn’t your choice to go away
I know you wanted to stay.
The days to weeks and weeks to months
Soon will be a year
And I know you will be back here.
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princessad1975
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2006-09-14 11:23:36]
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Re: When you left
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by MacGyver_Dk on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 01:36:32 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem. I could feel your separation and strong emotions to have your husband back home. I know how your feeling, and I wish your husband a safe trip home at Gods Speed.
Great write.
Thanks
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Re: When you left
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:38:42 PM AEST
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Your longing for your love one is well presented here. I'm sending good thoughts that he'll come home soon...all safe and sound. (I hope they all come home) I prefer peace to the whole war thing.
Take care.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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