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God above, Sacrifice me for Love.
Contributed by
ed
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When the darkness comes,
It cant be stopped.
Its out of control.
Getting blacker each day.
Blood is ready to bleed.
You're trapped between confusions.
The worlds inside your head and spinning.
It's out of control.
Prayers are to feel nothing.
You hide beneath your skin
and let the hate pour in.
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ed
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2003-02-13 22:20:00]
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Re: God above, Sacrifice me for Love.
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:52:39 AM AEST
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| Darkness comes out of delusion it takes some time to see the upcoming dawn..prayers never help when they are dumb...since you are truthful in your thoughts..I love to read this poem..venkat |
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Re: God above, Sacrifice me for Love.
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by M on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:47:28 AM AEST
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| You write short poems, but so effective, i like your writing, keep it coming...thank you for this one, it's made me think... |
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Re: God above, Sacrifice me for Love.
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 02:42:26 PM AEST
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| once again, excellent... |
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Re: God above, Sacrifice me for Love.
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
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Ed, I think you're right it all happens inside.
I saw somebody's thoughts projected on a screen when they were all wied up with contacts taped to their head (very uncomfortable)
I asled why they couldnt use a helmet but apparently the brain does not generate signals that get beyond a millimeter or two.
In other words it all happens inside you. Heaven, Hell, God etc.
I suppose there was unity before "The Big Bang", perhaps it was a mistake and what we are seing now is maximum diversification to ensure survival.
Perhaps part of the attempt to re-unify is going on before our very eyes in the form of "Black Holes" Have I said this before? Or was it on another page?
Very thought provoking write. |
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