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When I get to where I'm going
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 01:20:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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When I meet our maker at the pearly gates…
Will he greet me in kind or make me wait…
I’ve lived a life that’s full and my past has not been quiet…
And because of the things I’ve done, I haven’t tried to hide it…
My journeys and my age has given me great wisdom…
As though my thoughts have let this moment come…
I hope my darlin has seen and knows
Maybe I didn’t hold you always. It’s you that I chose…
If I didn’t do well by my children…
In my heart you’ve always been…
I have tried to live a fine existence…
I took life’s stress with much patience…
I hope I will be accepted home…
And forgiven for the lands I've roamed…
This world has been rough…
Most things I have faced have been tough…
I’ve been a man of means…
And when my life convenes…
I hope I can get to where I am going…
And be forgiven for the seed I’m sowing…
I am not sorry for the things I have done…
And can’t look back from where I've run…
But I am sorry for those that I have hurt…
And hope this brings you some comfort…
To know I never meant to hurt you…
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oneir8dude
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2006-09-14 01:20:51]
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:51:31 AM AEST
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I liked it. I also like your style at the end of the poem.
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by Skillz on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:09:22 AM AEST
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| What a wonderful poem..i think we all can relate |
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 06:50:01 PM AEST
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These are golden moments now set in stone.
A very touching write!
U r a good man and great writer.
A masterpeice of wisdom.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Your partener is a very lucky person 'cause u have a beautifull heart and aren't ashamed to lay it out there. |
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