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In The Name Of God
Contributed by
leslie
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 08:01:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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In the name of God
or Zeus
or Lord
or Jehovah
or Allah
or Khuda
or Shiva
or any name you wish to call me
I command you to
Murder
Maime
Destroy
Humillate
All those who think
Differently from you
Kill them by
Sword
Gun
Bomb
Gas
Behedding
Rock
Any way you can
Create
Mayhem
Heartache
Suffering
And then you will inherit the world
And die in martyrdom
For heaven or paradise eternally
OR
In the name of God
I command you to live
with kindness
with a forgiving heart
with a generous soul
with a just mind
without malice
with honestly
with compassion
with forgiveness
with equality
with love for your fellow man
And then you will inherit the world
And die in martyrdom
For heaven or paradise eternally
CHOOSE YOUR GOD WISELY
Copyright ©
leslie
... [
2006-09-13 20:01:00]
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Re: In The Name Of God
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 08:40:35 PM AEST
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Powerfully effective presentation of reason. I love the ending rhetorical summary advice, "CHOOSE YOUR GOD WISELY". First read o' your work, but not my last. Very nice!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: In The Name Of God
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by moldwarp on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 10:38:17 PM AEST
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| very very good. bravo :) |
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Re: In The Name Of God
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 01:43:29 AM AEST
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Very well said. Loved it. *clapping*
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: In The Name Of God
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 07:31:00 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned.
With passion. Blessed are the passionate.!
But martyrs are those who treasure their life and whose life is taken away by OTHERS, not those that explode themselves and take others with them on the trip that are unwilling and unprepared.
That is the difference between a martyr and ... oh no..... I get into trouble.
Poignantly w ritten and "WITH PASSION"
Hugs
Elizabeth
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Re: In The Name Of God
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:33:45 AM AEST
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Powerful and brillant... The last line was awesome.. This was a good poem and I am glad that I read this I am not really into war poetry so ... This was amazing..
Take care
Christina |
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