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Ira
Contributed by
TwistedCage
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 01:05:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Emerald windows of most sullen sheen
pierce the soul, the bewitching green;
her gaze relentless, like stormy sky’s
ache of seduction, those enchanted eyes.
Tender a heart, like the Monarchs wing,
flutters in fury for her coming king;
the thrilling chaos, with senses astray,
burn streams of affection, this carnal day.
Rhythmic quivers, behind heavenly tune,
dancing naked under a summers moon,
thinking of pleasure amidst all fair nerve,
she spins by circle in harmonious curve.
The fury concedes beneath sun broke sky
stopped to a halt, this most sensual spry.
She greets her king, by no means feign,
seduces him whole, and procures his reign.
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TwistedCage
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2006-09-13 13:05:02]
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Re: Ira
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 01:13:47 PM AEST
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| wow, beautifully written. |
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Re: Ira
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 02:08:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem !!!!! |
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Re: Ira
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 02:53:39 PM AEST
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I quite enjoyed this read. The first stanza especially. I can't help but think of the Black Widow and Praying Mantis.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Ira
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 08:07:01 PM AEST
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| Excellent job. |
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Re: Ira
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:49:52 AM AEST
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| You have such a capacity to bring things to life..I just love all your poetry, Hugs |
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