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6 LETTERS
Contributed by
OceanZ
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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6 words,
6 letters,
today i'm hurt,
this love caused BITTER!
6 words,
6 letters,
i'm so LONELY,
alone i shiver!
LONELY is the word,
i'm so alone,
without you around,
i'm dead to bone!
why are you mad?
why are you gone???
all alone~
i read your words,
sms's~
and i cry alone~
the things you wrote,
on my papers~
i memorized them all!
all alone,
against my face, wind had blown!
i miss you madly,
cause i love you badly,
why the hell are you gone:"(?
why the hell aren't we together?
why am i alone:"(?
6 letters~
yes i'm ~*~
L O N E L Y
6 words~
i wish to say:~*~
I LOVE YOU, BE MINE~ENDLESSLY!
My dear, MY darling~
YOU made me
A L I V E !
Today i'm lonely,
so please comeback.
without you near me,
i swear to you~ I CANT JUST~*~
S U R V I V E !
Copyright ©
OceanZ
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2006-09-13 12:47:51]
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Re: 6 LETTERS
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:21:30 PM AEST
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Ah do I ever know how you feel!!
Good poem with good feeling! Nice write. |
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Re: 6 LETTERS
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by richcol7522 on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 05:12:25 PM AEST
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I know how you feel all to well. Ive been going through something similar to this with my wife. Although we live under the same roof it is as if we dont even know each other, passing each as strangers as we live side by side. You did a very good job writting this. I hope that things get better for you.
Take care
Rich |
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Re: 6 LETTERS
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:02:08 PM AEST
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| As the saying goes, "No man is worth your tears, and the one that is, will never make you cry." Nice write though, very well done. |
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Re: 6 LETTERS
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:16:49 PM AEST
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| good write..but begging is so degrading.. |
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