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Contributed by
Skitzo-da-clown
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:17:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In darkness, I live in fear,
Wonderin if there could be anybody else in here?
Constantly havin to conflict myself to see if the path is clear
And at night I pray to my only friend
that he'll go ahead and bring my end
and send
A blessed angel to guide me to the place above,
a place no one knew of,
and it's full of love
a place where it never comes to push or shove
But thats only my dreams never to be true
cuz the truth is I'm sittin cryin over you
The truth is you left me but who knew
that you ever would say I would not do
and you threw me out
No matter how much I scream and shout
No matter how much I talk about
anything I have NO doubt
That this overpowering light
and what all my friends are sayin is right..........
That this hell that I am puttin myself thru
aint worth it
if it is over you..........
My Boo.
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Skitzo-da-clown
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2006-09-13 12:17:27]
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 01:50:39 PM AEST
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Touching soulful write, I loved the way it just carried along. Nicely done.
Reach deep inside yourself, you will find your way.
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 01:56:37 PM AEST
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| another great poem. some day the curtains will open and you'll see everything in a new way. but have to experience the bad to appreciate the good. |
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:19:32 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the flow..and like everyone says, if we don''t kknow pain we can never appreciate pleasure.
mary |
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:40:37 PM AEST
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I liked this.. it reminds me of what had happened to me and how I was left to wallow in my pain confused and heartbroken... This was a good poem...
Take care
christina |
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