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Come grow with me
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We are all gardener's in life,
we sow and reap from our harvests.
How willing and dedicated you are to maintain it,
only you , who can decide.
Deep inside you, lies the seeds of hope
sprinkle these and let them grow.
The seeds of love are plentiful,
throw as much as you want.
Only you will know how much to throw.
Sometimes when reaching in your bags of seeds,
without your knowledge you sprinkle these.
Seeds of hate, seeds of jealousy and even spite.
These weeds grows fast, threatening the young seedlings.
You must work hard and fast with all of your might.
Spread more seeds of love,caring and understanding,
water with kindness and compassion,
and fertilize with joy.
Soon your garden will be a thing of beauty with hard work and determination, a delight for everyone to see.
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jackee_line
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2003-02-13 20:40:00]
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Re: Come grow with me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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Hey, Jackee, I loved this a lot... Good one!!
Jenni |
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Re: Come grow with me
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by Arwen on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 05:49:42 AM AEST
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| Feels like you went thro' some life changing event...and you've come out of it stronger and more prepared. I sense a new resilience in ur words. This poem was lovely...you've obviously come far. Let nothing stop you from throwing seeds of love whenever n wherever you can. People benefit from it in the long run and they'll return the love tenfold. Good stuff jackie. |
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Re: Come grow with me
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:18:17 AM AEST
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great imagery that paints a very true picture of how we can effect and affect those around us
great job .
peace be yuor journey
terry
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Re: Come grow with me
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:58:50 AM AEST
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a great write with awesome imagery ..
woohoo
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: Come grow with me
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:02:02 AM AEST
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wow, a wonderful write. the way you used gardens to represent living was very interesting. reminds me of something my mom gave to me once. thank you for sharing.
kara |
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Re: Come grow with me
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by Spirit_Dancer on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 12:32:25 PM AEST
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So true...Life has many hurtful things in it already,, we should strive to be a delight! We all have fences to mend and along the way we should learn from the mistakes, and leave prints of care on others hearts.
Love,
Spirit_Dancer....:D |
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Re: Come grow with me
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by Jilli_bean on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 02:27:59 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE..i think whatever you went through it made you realize ...that only you can make yourself..happy or better or what have you..This poem really pointed that out. |
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