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I Wish I Could
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:41:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish I could talk to you,
and ask you what's on your mind.
I wish I could call you,
just to say hi and see how you are doing.
I wish I could tell you how sorry I am,
and that I hope we could move on from this.
I wish I could see you smile at me,
laugh at my awkwardness and stupidity.
I wish I could just give you one last hug,
before life ends.
I wish I could take you out one last time,
to the store or even to eat.
I wish I could just take a ride around town with you,
talking about life and laughing at each other's jokes.
I wish I could look into your blue eyes,
and see you happy once more.
There's a lot of things that I wish I could do with you,
but I can't do anyone of them.
Because you hate me,
you despise my existence.
But even with that in my mind,
I still wish I could.
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whiteleo1984
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Re: I Wish I Could
(User Rating: 1 ) by twbanter on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:24:49 AM AEST (User
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I feel your anguish in this one. I could give you the age old advice of "get over it," but that never hits home 'till you're ready to do that anyway, does it? We've all been there, and that was a good reminder....
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Re: I Wish I Could
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:23:10 PM AEST (User
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And I wish I could too...
Good poem with good feeling and emotion.
I know where you're coming from. If only we could have one more..... well, no use pondering over it...
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Re: I Wish I Could
(User Rating: 1 ) by one-curly-fry on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 04:07:54 AM AEST (User
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Man, this is really powerful - incredibly sad. I don't know what else to say. I can relate, but not in wishing I could talk to a girl I once had - for I've left them when they seem to fade out of my life (When I sent you away). But I can relate in knowing how good something can be with someone and yet you can't have it.
I wouldn't knock this poem in anyway simply because of the power behind it. You're a man who knows himself!
- Tim |
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