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The Poet's Storm
Contributed by
alison
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Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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His thoughts far away,
His mind lost in some unknown time,
As he spins his hair through his fingers,
And presses them against his temple,
His stormy blues eyes thunder,
With mighty force and intensity,
He is still,
Like a mountain older than time,
His body follows his mind away,
As he is carried from the box, ashen room,
And the dim lights must become brilliant,
Through his eyes of stormy weather.
I wonder?
My dear poet,
Where are you?
Where have you been?
Shall you ever return to me once more?
For I miss your smile like sunshine,
That revel your teeth like pure clouds,
Yet still I marvel at your freedom from confinement,
And that your spirit will not be tied down,
There is no room, prison, nor person that can keep you long,
All you need do, is start the storm in your eyes of blue,
For such is the life of the poet.
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alison
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Re: The Poet's Storm
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by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:33:07 AM AEST
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| beautiful, wonderful write... very well done, keep up the great work! |
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Re: The Poet's Storm
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by twbanter on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:28:56 AM AEST
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Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Nice! I don't remember being in your class though, and I wish you'd stop talking about me... LOL
THAT, was beautiful. So good! I loved it. I've lived in that dream world, too many times.....
Tom W |
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Re: The Poet's Storm
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by TwistedCage on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 01:21:06 PM AEST
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This was a great read!
Beautifully written... |
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Re: The Poet's Storm
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by one-curly-fry on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem!
I'm glad a firend of mine led me here, because I've kept mine to myself - tired of people not following me.
This poem reminds me of some other established poets and I wish I could write like that. Alas, I think I'm too much of a hopeless romantic and get too carried away with feelings for others that those types of poems fail.
Still, this is a great poem and I really don't know what to say... and I'm usually very talkative...
- Tim |
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