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Time
Contributed by
bobbyzimmerman
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Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 08:32:42 PM in AEST
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I am nineteen years, and was five yesterday.
I'll be sixty tomorrow, balding and grey.
Time will continue, less me, and still remain
I'm a pebble being hurled at a freight train.
We are radii in the circle of time, 11
An abyss from which we will never climb 11
I'll one day be swept by a biblical swirl,
And I will be dead, and no death stops the world.
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Re: Time
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 08:40:48 PM AEST
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Interesting and thought provoking.
Peace, Laura (who thinks we've all just been here, there...wherever... for an infinity) *smiles* |
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Re: Time
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:32:51 PM AEST
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| interesting concept..maybe death doesn't stop anything but staaarts a new beginning...? |
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Re: Time
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:00:28 PM AEST
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| Very good. But, I don't believe you are 19. This poems much too philosophical for a 19 year old.... and you must have been optimistic that you could write a good pessimistic poem. Well...that optimism paid off. Congrat's. |
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Re: Time
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:37:56 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece..
And truthful...
honey56 |
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