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Franz
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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His hands,
like ocean waves over me.
His kiss,
passed like a veil upon my lips.
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LostDream
... [
2003-02-13 20:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Franz
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mad-Mancunian on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 11:05:37 PM AEST (User
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Errr...hello? seems like you didn't keep to haiku format. |
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Re: Franz
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 05:38:14 PM AEST (User
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This is good, but yes, not haiku. Haiku is 5-7-5 |
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