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What I Should Tell You
Contributed by
drapes
on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:29:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I don't even know where to start,
Everything is falling apart.
Whatever I say
Is okay
Because it doesn't matter.
You loved me so
For all to know,
Seems years ago,
Was it all a show?
Where did it go?
You're just like him, nothing more.
Neither would be one to adore.
Friends, you say
And that's okay.
Prove it to me,
Then we'll see.
But I've had it with you.
I've run out
Of things to do.
You wear me out,
I see your doubt
Come pouring through.
I've had enough with you.
Copyright ©
drapes
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2006-09-12 16:29:38]
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Re: What I Should Tell You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:10:03 PM AEST
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| i know i've been through that situation before. good job portraying it. great poem! |
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Re: What I Should Tell You
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 08:59:30 AM AEST
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Your poem simply took me gaping breathlessly. I'm speechless.
Great poem! Keep writing!
-Butch Corpuz
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Re: What I Should Tell You
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 02:50:10 PM AEST
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strong write
Shari |
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