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Tell Me What You See
Contributed by
drapes
on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Look at what I'm doing,
And tell me what you see.
A myspace whore, a computer geek,
Go and label me.
Look at me in action,
Tell me what you find.
An athlete, a competitor,
Keep those words in mind.
Glance along my body,
Tell me what is there.
A lazy blob with a boring face,
Average eyes and hair.
Listen when I speak,
Tell me what you hear.
Any words of wisdom,
Or a buzzing in the air?
Watch me when I write,
Tell me what you read.
A page of messy letters,
Or a personal masterpiece?
Analyze my quirks,
And all of my techniques.
Keep an open mind,
And tell me what you think.
Look me in the eye,
And tell me what you see.
A pair of dull brown circles,
Or is there something in between?
Sneak into my soul,
Is there anything in there?
Like an innocent girl in a scary world,
Just looking for someone that cares.
Now peek into my heart,
Is it full or is it empty?
Come and make your way inside,
This lonely girl needs company.
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drapes
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2006-09-12 16:14:42]
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Re: Tell Me What You See
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:52:12 PM AEST
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I see an incredible soul with bigtime talent
Shari |
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Re: Tell Me What You See
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:08:51 PM AEST
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drapes, I really like this, I`m here, I`ll just lay by my bowl..Crow
great write.. |
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Re: Tell Me What You See
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 02:21:18 PM AEST
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| You write very powerful poetry! its uncomplicated by thought provoking! |
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Re: Tell Me What You See
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by moogster on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 01:09:26 PM AEST
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| Well done. Pete. LOL . |
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