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Madness
Contributed by
rdv1960
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Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:32:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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slivers of sadness
signs of madness
blades of shiny steel
zealous cutting
anxious stabbing
that's how I sometimes feel
rain-filled clouds are sailing by
ocean with her dark deep calling
she slowly turns her back on me
today I've got the blues, my friends
today I've got the blues
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2006-09-12 14:32:47]
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Re: Madness
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by topcatcrowther on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:18:08 PM AEST
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This peom is so sad, good though, i hope you get over your blues soon friend.
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Re: Madness
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by xfrozenwindx on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST
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Wow! This was definently a good read, which is sometimes hard to find. I loved the emotion and the message, and well, EVERYTHING! It sounded like a song, almost. The flow was right on point, and it was delivered well. Great job! Maybe you should enter this into a poetry competition?
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