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Hallelujah!
Contributed by
rdv1960
on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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When I confess nothing at all
I smell your sweat and inner heat
so hot your body's quickly melting
under the spell I put on you
your pretended holiness
less holy under that black dress
and virgin-like your collar is
the color of your guilt
the innocence as untrue as
your Lord made you more human
than most other human beings
would ever want or ask Him to
can you give a Hallelujah
as you hear the angels singing
ever watching guilty bodies
from the corner of your eye
can you still, you holy *******
sing it out and make it loud
when you hear your Master calling:
can you give me a Hallelujah?
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Re: Hallelujah!
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 11:39:58 AM AEST
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Such a sinful world, I agree and slightly ambiguous is your poem but it has profound meaning
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Re: Hallelujah!
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 11:33:20 PM AEST
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provocative.
intriguing. |
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