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Haunting You
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:04:03 AM in AEST
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Over there,
I'll be waiting...
Down a dusty gravel road
Underneath the house,
Rotting, clinging to my bones.
At home,
I'll be waiting
For you to remember me,
A part you have forgotten.
You are hiding from me.
Come home,
I'll be waiting...
And tears will fill my hunger,
While the ache eats your heart,
Realizing you recognize me.
In the end
I'll be waiting...
For you to consume me,
Eating all the pain you fed me,
Back into yourself.
~Rhiannon
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Re: Haunting You
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:22:28 AM AEST
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| I liked the poem there are lots of different meaning in it I know i could connect to it good write |
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Re: Haunting You
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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| Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Feel free to read more and critique as harshly as you please. |
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Re: Haunting You
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by Lucid_Tides on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:54:57 AM AEST
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| Decent poem. Each stanza shows a lot of feeling. impressive. |
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Re: Haunting You
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:41:44 AM AEST
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| nice read.. |
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Re: Haunting You
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 06:53:02 PM AEST
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Atleast we know the other will suffer instead of living happily.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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