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No energy left
Contributed by
M
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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And it's hard to keep on going on
when all you've got left
amounts to nothing,
And when the people around you
Give up on you.
I'm so tired,
And with no energy left,
There's no way i can fight back against them,
No way i can help myself,
i'm helpless,
useless,
No good no more.
My foundations are falling away,
The walls you helped me build
Have fallen since you left me,
Hope,
Hope come back, please,
Come back and wake me up.
It's like i don't care no more,
Everything's black and
Nothing's real anymore,
It's all a part of this nightmare
That i can't wake up from,
But no longer do i care.
Copyright ©
M
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2003-02-13 19:20:00]
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Re: No energy left
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 05:59:56 AM AEST
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| energy is still there to write good poems.. pick up it.. goodluck.. venkat |
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Re: No energy left
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by ed on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:40:34 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed reading it M. It'll all be o.k.. I know so. |
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Re: No energy left
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 07:29:13 PM AEST
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Emily this was a great poem and you are not useless. To Lucie you are a wonderful, beautiful person. This was a great poem keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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