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can't think of a title
Contributed by
zeppchic420
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sky makes me feel
my mortality
so real
The endless abundance
of clouds and air
show me how i
am not really here
i glance up in sunlight
the clouds float my way
yet another reminder
of my dying day
The moon and the sun
show me the way through the dark
and once again i'm reminded
in this world i barely make a mark
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2003-02-13 19:00:00]
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Re: can't think of a title
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:45:36 PM AEST
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| this is lovely, hard to believe was written under a teacher's two minute challange, well done! huggs always nessa |
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Re: can't think of a title
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by karoody on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 02:09:14 AM AEST
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| i agree with nessa, i enjoyed reading |
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