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Alone In Paradise
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:26:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Feeling fine in paradise
But now this emptiness returns
I watch with a slight sense of inevitability
As all the good in my life catches and burns
Gazing at the bottom of my glass
I am frustrated with the loss of a friend
Alone here in paradise
Into this horrible practice I descend
With 1000 words of confidence
I'm falling faster than before
I play this dangerous game by myself
And I can't even remember the score
Beautiful sunshine
Beautiful rain
Stuck alone here in paradise
With a knot in my throat that comes from pain
No words to comprehend
No thoughts to think
Into the rain I scream for a possibility
With no chance I am lead and I start to sink
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Exodus
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2006-09-11 09:26:38]
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Re: Alone In Paradise
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:12:26 AM AEST
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Re: Alone In Paradise
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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I really enjoy how well the sorrow is conveyed.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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