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A Cat
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 08:19:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I dream of opening the door
to a flood of smiling faces
cheering to see me
- great girls with stories of last summer
- mates like brothers who can laugh
just as long as me…
- One girl – more like a goddess –
to love forever…
- One mate above mates
always there regardless…
And parents with nothing but pride
in their eyes…
But I open my eyes
I open the door
to a dark hallway
and a Cat
crying for dinner.
2/3/06
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2006-09-11 08:19:55]
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Re: A Cat
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by doug on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:46:41 PM AEST
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Oh totally! I mean I don't have a cat
but the rest of it was dead on. I know
how you feel and I wish for the same
things. Don't feel bad though I mean ,
crap I don't even have a cat. Great job.
Loved it , Truly , Doug |
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Re: A Cat
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 10:13:18 PM AEST
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*chuckling at doug's "I don't even have a cat" comment*
Wow .. I actually was drawn by the title, as I have a special
affinity for cats.
the most mysterious of creatures ..
do not fret over the desires you expressed, that seem
unfulfilled here. There is a reason stationed for everything
in life, though we may not appreciate, (and even resent) it
at any given time. In the meantime .. a cat can be a truly
inspiring and welcome ally, (if he gets his way .. lol)
Loved the write!!
~Breezy |
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Re: A Cat
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 07:43:40 AM AEST
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I like this. Are these the key elements to a satisfied life? I don't know, but they definatly go a long way towards getting there.
The ending seems to leave the piece hanging nicely.
Good Job
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Re: A Cat
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by elle on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 05:56:53 PM AEST
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| This poem speaks to me of a loneliness & a longing yet to be fufilled. If this was a real dream then take heart because life is attending you the assurance of love. . . a simple kindred creature waiting outside your door. . . basically seeking also. If it is metaphoric then you're already innately aware of all the above. . . & express it so genuinely. Nicely done, Tim. Peace :) elle |
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