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The Vampire Slayer
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 03:42:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I glimpse you through the window pane,
feel the blood course through my veins,
I hear you softly sing to me,
you fly as a bat to my balcony,
your voice feels like a warm embrace,
I long to feel your breath on my face,
I feel the passion rise in me,
each note you sing, says come to me,
the singing stops, replaced by screams,
I snap out of my trance, could this be a dream,
then my world is ripped apart,
I see the blood, the stake through your heart,
the vampire slayer opens my door,
tells me im free, you are no more,
I circle him, in my embrace,
then laugh with glee at the fear in his face,
its so sad my darling, I ruined his plans,
he never expected me to have fangs,
I suck his blood till his dead at my feet,
I must go my love more victims to meet.
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lillyjane
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2006-09-11 03:42:03]
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Re: The Vampire Slayer
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 01:43:52 PM AEST
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I must say i am impress with your dark write.
Welcome to the dark side sweety mahahahaha. :) |
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Re: The Vampire Slayer
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 10:22:47 PM AEST
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foreboding dark..
very nice~
B |
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Re: The Vampire Slayer
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 10:36:55 PM AEST
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*shuddering at VQ's comment*
lol
lilly .. holy cow, girl! (you heard me! lol) Creepy and
surprising !! lol I can't believe you just left your
love lying there though .. (or right .. vampire!
*gives head a shake*)
excellent portrayal of the dark and eerie, lilly.
my compliments! (bon appétit!! LOL)
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Re: The Vampire Slayer
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by maestar on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:20:34 AM AEST
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scary write!
congrats.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: The Vampire Slayer
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 06:15:37 AM AEST
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| You dark write like the night.....scary....I am very impressed actually...I like it. I have read books by Robert MaGammon(hope I spelt that right) he is one fantastic writer of vampires and ware wolves . They are believable writes. Good job. |
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