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The Last Song
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 12:15:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silent cries of a tired heart giving out
Falling into her winter swansong
A life had lived mute and loving
To become vacant in the old deserts
Blind life’s scales tipped to emptiness
Irony mocking through cold curtains of solitude
Leaving tender memories to their naiveté
Distant and lost in faraway times
The great void smiled rushing to her fall
A lone star now would shine her brilliance
An epitaph got written by the stars and the moon
Her place at last in the splendid cosmos…
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Sasha
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2006-09-11 00:15:25]
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Re: The Last Song
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by doug on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:12:10 PM AEST
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A sad descent into emptiness
and finally a place for her in the
cosmos. I hope we all have a
place up there. A well described
picture. Great writing. Truly , Dusty |
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Re: The Last Song
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by doug on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:12:48 PM AEST
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A sad descent into emptiness
and finally a place for her in the
cosmos. I hope we all have a
place up there. A well described
picture. Great writing. Truly , Doug |
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