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The Children of the Bones
Contributed by
doug
on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 12:00:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Follow the path
of the crescent
moon
unto the land
of those who wait
qp
Heed the Sign
of the eye
and
the wings of
giant river owls
()
Take the Shape
of the ancient
soul
wrap your bones
in the mist of fate
X
Turn the Lock
speak the
words
free them
from the MirrorGate
Outward walked the Skeletal Lords
with wings
of Owls upon their Backs
And from their chests
stared an eye ; a single eye
of polished black
Lust to kill and land to Roam
Vengeance now upon the Throne
Lust to kill and land to Roam
The Children of the Bones
Copyright ©
doug
... [
2006-09-11 00:00:09]
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Re: The Children of the Bones
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 02:05:08 AM AEST
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| Amazingly creepy write and i love it. |
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Re: The Children of the Bones
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 03:58:59 AM AEST
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| I agree its very creepy, great poem xxx |
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Re: The Children of the Bones
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:29:27 PM AEST
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OOOoooo .........doug, this was unimaginably eerie!
Captivating with a capital "C"!!
It was like reading the prologue to a mysterious fantasy
thriller .. I was enthralled and want more! lol
Excellent post!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Children of the Bones
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by True on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:16:01 PM AEST
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| I like it, it sounds like a quest in a story. The first line reminds me of the 3rd Indian Jones. |
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Re: The Children of the Bones
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:56:51 PM AEST
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..a fairy tale dream of the macabre-
spectacular line-breaks and what a brilliant, quick 3rd verse-
powerful finale as well..
extremely well written~
what a work!
*****
B
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