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Clouds Congrats On Soul Mates
Contributed by
the_callif
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 05:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This morning I woke
To some holes in my sky
And a massive white boneyard
Ten miles high
But the clouds, they spoke!
And ripped right apart
And thats how it was
When you broke my heart
I awoke from my omen
To remember the rain
And the clouds lovely news
I'd never share in their pain
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2006-09-10 17:04:43]
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Re: Clouds Congrats On Soul Mates
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by kiss_yourself_goodbye on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 05:58:03 PM AEST
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This is wicked, i love the description at the beginning and the 'when you broke my heart' shows what te poem is about. A good use of language, a wicked poem
Check mine out called 'four reasons' feedback would rly be appreciated
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Re: Clouds Congrats On Soul Mates
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 10:07:55 PM AEST
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I have to agree with emma...
This was beautifully written...and your imagery is amazing...
But the line "When you broke my heart" I also have to agree shows the meaning behind the poem.
I am sorry for your pain...
Rich |
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