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Loving you
Contributed by
Evita
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I didn't know that the stars were shining
i didn't notice that the sky is blue
i didn't understand why love is so exciting
until i fell in love with you
Your eyes are like stars in my own sky
your smile can colour my whole life
when i hold you, i have the strength to move on
i know, this feeling can't be wrong
You're the only person i can put my trust in
you know me better than anyone, here
in a world full of strangers, dark and dull
you came into my life, you made it full
Loving you i learned to appreciate little things in life
i knew that you'll always be my wasted heart's desire
don't ever leave me, i don't know if i can live
without your love, i waste my time
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Evita
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2006-09-10 12:09:29]
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Re: Loving you
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by kiss_yourself_goodbye on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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Wow this is deep
Reminds me of "puppy love"
Keep up the good work
My poems underneath yours, have a read pls, would appreciate feedback
Emma |
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Re: Loving you
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by Alison on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:35:23 PM AEST
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| very sweet write! made me smile! great job!!! |
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Re: Loving you
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by The_Callif on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:55:34 PM AEST
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i only stopped by to see how the site was progressing... but i read this and felt compelled to comment you.
such a beautiful love poem!
it captures the essence of love as only a great poet can |
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