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Four Reasons
Contributed by
kiss_yourself_goodbye
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:52:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The first is the things u said to me,
The second is the way you set me free.
The third is the way you made me feel,
The last is the reason I am here still.
Ill start with the first,
The things that you “say”,
Without these words,
Things wouldn’t be this way.
The way that you set me free,
Is the worst reason of the four,
Because you never will,
And you never did before.
The third - the way u make me feel,
Is really not a reason at all,
Because everything you put me through,
Takes me one step closer to fall.
The fourth and final reason,
Keeps me sitting here right now,
Because I cannot leave you,
And I really don’t know how.
Four reasons that I love you,
None of them make sense,
So maybe I should walk away,
And leave your lonely bench.
But it’s really not that easy,
Now you’re no longer brave,
It’s the hardest thing to say goodbye,
When you’re staring at a grave.
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Re: Four Reasons
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by Alison on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:38:35 PM AEST
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| great ending!!! |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:43:51 PM AEST
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| That was so realistic. And maybe true in some situations. A very well written piece. Thanks for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by MsCrys on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:50:14 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I had to read it for a second time after reading the ending. Nicely done. :) |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by Oneir8dude on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 07:43:28 PM AEST
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Wow,
Very nice job... I started thinking this was about abuse of
a woman and a dead beat guy...
I liked the twist... I found myself angry at the
guy and WOW... Nice job... Good work... let's have more
Bill |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 09:54:31 PM AEST
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| I have a poem with the same title..not so sad though. |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:05:03 PM AEST
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| This was an excellent write. Very twisted. |
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Re: Four Reasons
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by The_Callif on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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verryyyy good!
in my opinion dark poetry is definately not shared enough...
beautifully written
yours truly
-Callif |
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