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Because OF U
Contributed by
Pawan
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:28:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I have cried because of U,
My tear drops had dried;
Because of U.
I lost my spark because of U,
Everything seems so dark;
Because of U.
I lost my belief because of U,
I don't want to live;
Because of U.
I forgot to play because of U,
It seems that I am living my life, like a statue of clay;
All Because of U.
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Written-Because of U
Copyright ©
Pawan
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2006-09-10 11:28:03]
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Re: Because OF U
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by Pawan on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:29:31 AM AEST
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Just have a look and be diplomatic in my suggestions.
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Re: Because OF U
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by Pawan on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:29:33 AM AEST
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Just have a look and be diplomatic in my suggestions.
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Re: Because OF U
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by Pawan on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:38:55 AM AEST
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Because of U I wrote the poem.
Because of U I wait for replies...................
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Re: Because OF U
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:39:14 PM AEST
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Self praise no recommendation be,
Patience works,just wait and see,
Repetitive this poem is too
Is that why you called it,
Because of you!
Your poem is quite addictive, actually quite rythmic too. Short and sweet , but definitely unique. Sue x |
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