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When I am Old
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 07:15:58 AM in AEST
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Will you still love me when I am old,
When my beauty has withered away,
When my sparkling eyes are dull and grey,
Will you leave me or will you stay,
When my once lithe body is sadly misshapen,
And my face is all wrinkled and lined,
Will you still want to kiss,when I look like this,
Or will you turn away from me and decline,
If I have to walk with a zimmer frame,
Because my knees are so old that they creak,
Will you take me walking, will we still be talking,
Or will you go because you are so weak,
When my once pearly teeth are falling out,
When I have to be fitted with dentures,
Will you still be keen . with me to be seen,
Will you still take me on special adventures,
When I am old, and my hair turns grey,
Will you still love me so strong and true,
Because I am still nifty , even at fifty,
But you my love are only twenty two.
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Re: When I am Old
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:41:47 AM AEST
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| Loved this poem jerseysue, if the answer is no lock him in the loft!! It makes you wonder how the idea of a toy boy does work, probably doesn't last the course! At least he'd be young enough to work and then perhaps pay for cosmetic surgery and a hollywood smile for you! |
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Re: When I am Old
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by kiss_yourself_goodbye on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:05:18 PM AEST
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This poem is brilliiant, very true, because the whole idea really doesn't make snese, maybe they it will put a message across to some people
Emma |
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Re: When I am Old
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:46:19 PM AEST
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lol .. sorry sue, but I HAD to laugh at the last two lines...
priceless!!!
omg .. this was absolutely wonderful. And the ending ..
holy heck, was MOST surprising .. lol
Very enjoyable, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: When I am Old
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 05:25:30 PM AEST
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| Hum! Just a little note to say this isn't a true story, and I don't have a toy boy. ha ha Sue x |
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Re: When I am Old
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 04:09:06 AM AEST
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Haha Sue, I read about a woman who married a man 40 years younger then her, can understand her but whats his motives..? xxx
Brilliant love it... |
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Re: When I am Old
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 12:08:25 AM AEST
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HAH!
..what a grand thought~ ..lol
(that final stanza is unbridled Sue!)
..the cradel of love (no pun intended..lol) knows no age.. it is not bound by the physical.. but thrives in a state of mentality.. only-
for those, at least, who are bound by truth alone-
B
Great post!
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