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Death of a Stranger
Contributed by
devils_denial
on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:24:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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His wallet containing four hundred pounds,
Blasting in his ear, Hip Hop sounds.
In his suede jacket,
A rather large pay packet.
A bunch of keys for a lock,
An airline ticket bound for Bangkok.
A credit card out of date,
His hair looks a right state.
A picture of a loved one,
And what looks like his only son.
A mobile phone,
In recieved calls, his Aunt Joan.
Written on a piece of paper found in his car,
An address for Sindy's Bar.
Covered in gold and some silver,
Could he be a drug dealer?
In his hand a note,
Saying 'Get out now, otherwise we'll slit your throat! '
Look over there, a wedding ring,
That was eveything.
By Jay Basey © 2006
Copyright ©
devils_denial
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2006-09-10 04:24:19]
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Re: Death of a Stranger
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by rdv1960 on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:28:48 AM AEST
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Hi Jay,
Nice one this is, good rhyming and a fine choice of words,
Grtz,
roberto |
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Re: Death of a Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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| Has a very interesting fast-paced plot that keeps your reader wondering from one line to the next. I like this style. |
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Re: Death of a Stranger
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by kiss_yourself_goodbye on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:07:04 PM AEST
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I like this, it kept me reading, as said above.
it made me want to know more and more about the man
Emma |
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Re: Death of a Stranger
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by ravensofthedark on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:18:54 AM AEST
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| nice poem jay but who is this you are talking about because that sounds to me like a thousand people feeling shame |
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