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Ophthalmophobia
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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The thought of things to behold…
Leaves me anxious and a little cold…
If I was to look at it with an open eye…
The pressure in my gut would make me die…
I know the way I think it should be…
And no other way do I see…
I can’t imagine why you say…
You think I should do it your way…
For I cannot stomach the silly pictures in my head…
With all the mistakes that my ego fed…
It scares me to see through my own eyes…
Yet I don’t think I could let my soul fly…
To your way of doing what I do…
When I hate the way I do it too…
It makes me shake in my boots so old…
To gaze at thing that all see so cold…
I know I need help…
I can’t help myself…
I fear seeing through my own eyes…
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Re: Ophthalmophobia
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by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 11:31:17 PM AEST
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good poem. I REALLY liked it :)
luvsya!
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Re: Ophthalmophobia
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:24:22 PM AEST
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I loved the honesty and emotion in this write! The end sealed it so tight. Ill look for your work!
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Re: Ophthalmophobia
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 01:38:28 PM AEST
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i really like this it was an awesome poem great work
Lots of Love
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