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Wasted years...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:28:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tired of
Painful lies
Regretting all
Tearful sighs
Pushing on
Trying hard
Hating life
Remaining scarred
Why continue
Carrying on
Nothings left
You’re gone
Left behind
Wasted disgrace
Reminders of
Your face
Haunting me
Still today
Nothing takes
It away
This hurt
Confusion, agony
Still here
Tormenting me
If quitting
Takes away
The pain
I say
It’s ok
Ill surrender
Into you
Please remember
Ill love
You until
Nothing remains
Even still
After beating
Hearts die
Weeping eyes
Cant cry
Broken souls
Torn apart
Broken remains
Broken hearts
Living on
In misery
Hating myself
I see
I’m nothing
Never will
Be anything
Yet still
I try
To please
Only you
On knees
Begging pleading
Trying all
Every time
I fall
Ill leave
You alone
You left
Can’t atone
Sorry for
The tears
Wasted life
Wasted years...
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Re: Wasted years...
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:35:59 PM AEST
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ouch..made me cringe. very painful, but fantastic.
--talli
ps: thanks for the comment |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by babylugz on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 05:20:12 PM AEST
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| wow i really like it. I too have felt as if I have wasted my years on quite a few things. But we should all make things better right now so that in years to come we won't look back and feel that we wasted these years as well. If you ever need someone to talk to just send me a message. Take care |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by rdv1960 on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 05:24:48 PM AEST
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I love a story, pains included; I love the short lines, the almost-chant, wonderful, powerful.
Good one, this.
roberto |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 07:46:12 PM AEST
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oh gosh, holder .. this was excruciatingly heart-wrenching.
[hoping all is well ..]
I love the way you wrote this .. the form made it read a
bit faster than the norm .. and I think it gave it a punch!
(As if the words needed one ..)
Great job.
~Breezy |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by mazeof_darkness on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:14:50 PM AEST
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| wow............ amazing way with words.........i can feel the hurt......... i have wasted alot of years myself on things that never work, keep up the wonderful writting |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by topcatcrowther on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 06:49:12 PM AEST
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| i like the fast beat to it, fab peom. well done |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:18:29 PM AEST
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Oh, my! This is wonderful!
For one, it is like the poem I never wrote! I can relate very much.
This was indeed very emotional. Very powerful, crative style.
All in all, an amazing write!
Great job! |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 06:14:24 PM AEST
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| I love the flow of this write. Very powerful images. I hope things get better for you. |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 02:14:16 PM AEST
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| Powerful and deep...all at the same time.Awesome write!! |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by LoztSn1p3r on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:02:53 AM AEST
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| Wow, great write, i can almost feel the passion in it... |
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Re: Wasted years...
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:51:34 PM AEST
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| Time is the worst thing to waste. I feel the same way about my last relationship. |
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