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Face It
Contributed by
Amandafaith
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Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:02:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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From wishing upon hate, you'll never decieve my fate of this very position I am in.
Im losing control, and giving in, I can't take this anymore.
You tore my heart open, to see what I really was.
You sucked the life out of me, just to ease your pain.
So face the facts Im gone, beyond sunsets of destiny.
Copyright ©
Amandafaith
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2006-09-09 16:02:50]
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Re: Face It
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:24:10 PM AEST
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| short and sweet. well, more bitter, but..good write. |
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Re: Face It
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 05:04:37 PM AEST
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| i liked it. but "sunsets of desitny" sort of took a angry bitter poem and made it sound like a prequel to a western movie. |
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Re: Face It
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by rdv1960 on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 05:31:19 PM AEST
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decieve>>deceive
Very decisive, good, strong reading. You're pain will be gone soon; the decision you made allready.
Good one, this.
roberto |
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Re: Face It
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:11:10 PM AEST
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| Ooh, interesting. I like it and can definitely relate. good write! |
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