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Living online
Contributed by
lifefadingaway
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Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 03:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why do I feel so alone
When so many around me seem to care
They listen to my storys and my fears
But I can't feel that they're really there
I'm scared of going outside to see
If they really care about me
I like to be safe behind my computerscreen
So I know my tears won't be seen
But are these people real
Do they understand the way I feel
When I laugh I'm all alone
My real feelings will never be shown
I don't want to go outside anymore
Afraid of living, afraid of reality
I locked my door, I won't be seen
Is this really how I want to live
Because I feel there's so much to give
I want to go outside but now I've lost my key
Do I still have time to break free
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2006-09-09 15:46:12]
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Re: Living online
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:29:29 PM AEST
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hell ya you've got time to break free. It is rather nice behind the computer screen, on ypdc or something, but...it's a hobby, after all, not a life. life only exists with other people, without them, it can't really be called living. take a chance, and try facing reality. if it doesn't work...well, we'll always be waiting.
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Re: Living online
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 03:02:32 AM AEST
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| I can relate to what your saying, im trying now to live my life out side to. It has also helped me though being on line, got many friends ..It can take over if you are not careful.. xxx |
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Re: Living online
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:19:38 PM AEST
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GREAT poem, I can relate so much!
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