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Nothing
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 02:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Emptiness takes me over,
As I sink deeper into this darkness....
Where I will dwell.
The shadows that I created,
The darkness that I previously caressed.
The fragile blue sky’s betrayed me,
Blinded by the sunlight that I have grown to despise.
I fell for the sake of finding the duration of my flight.
The downward journey makes me feel I have reached my potential...
Nothing.
What was the reason for me?
A traveller lost in sleep.
I sold my innocent soul to whoever paid to care.
Now, I have nothing for memories.
I cry empty tears.
Why bother?
Forgotten by my illusions,
I depicted all my fears.
Dreams are now being scattered.
I have very little say,
What I do say, has very little meaning.
Time is passing me by slowly,
I am regretting each day.
My flaws have many stories to tell....
How?
My high points only have endings that make no sense.
I question if you ever cared how I was feeling.
Now, I don't even care how I am feeling.
Did I ever listen to what my heart was saying to me?
Should I have ever been to begin with?
Many speculations rise from my indecisive mind,
All in the name of what happiness I may or may not find.
To be glanced at and left, not really seen.
I am only to be blamed.
To step onto center stage untalented,
I am to be shamed...gladly I take it.
Emptiness fills the air around me,
I feel I need to undeniably pray....but to who?
My emptiness will be the death of me. When?
This, I know all too well,
A heart can only break so much before there is nothing left of it.
My feelings...you never glanced back to see....
Where were you?
Here lies me, myself and I
Here, slowly die all the questions....
Where am I?
What do I care?
When is my end?
Why do you not care?
How am I?
Who cares?
~Rhiannon
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Re: Nothing
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 03:05:16 PM AEST
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Full of emotion...the struggling is only too fimiliar...very well written, good job on it, not that you seem to care though >_>...sorry.
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Re: Nothing
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by Faust on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 03:19:16 PM AEST
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Very well written and the feeling of sorrow is conveyed extremely well.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: Nothing
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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I'm so moved, I can only say WOW for now. Your writing skills are brilliant. You leave me in sorrow and deep awe, with your very emotional writes.
Peace my friend,
Laura |
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