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The life for me.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 01:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Always wanted to live on a ranch,
then one day got my chance,
met a cowboy, made me his wife,
at last I got my cow girl life,
I castrated bulls, roped steers,
sat round the camp fire drinking beers,
I gave that life my heart and soul,
I even ate cold beans, out an old tin bowl,
one day I even broke a toe,
was thrown by a bull at the rodeo,
we went riding the range, my cowboy and me,
some how ended up, in injun territory,
the chief and my cowboy had a pow wow,
the chief pointed at me said I want that gal,
my cowboy was scared, gazed at the floor,
thats how I became an indian squaw,
That old chief, declared his love for me,
kept me zipped up in his old tepee,
one day I spotted a passing wagon train,
I escaped and joined, on the trail again,
Then I opened my eyes,it was a day dream,
I was laying by the pool eating ice cream,
I wasn't a cow girl after all,
but dont you think, my day dreams cool..
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lillyjane
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Re: The life for me.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 01:18:23 PM AEST
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That was absolutely fantastic, Lilly! Fun from th' openin' line. My smile got bigger after ev'ry verse. Top o' th' line, girl!
wabl
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Re: The life for me.
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 03:15:40 PM AEST
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| Ha ha loved it. You got to tell me about this dream in October. Perhaps we might try to relive it. Well us ladies like dreams to come true. This made me smile, and there aint been much of that the last week. See ya cowgirl or squaw. Sue xx |
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Re: The life for me.
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 07:54:22 PM AEST
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Lillyjane, I have to say this was cute as hec. I'm glad Cowboy Ken inspired ya. I'm smiling ear to ear at that last stanza. Cool.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: The life for me.
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 09:26:08 PM AEST
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Yes..
I'm thinkin' that yer poem is great
better than salsa in the lone star state.
mary |
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Re: The life for me.
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by rdv1960 on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:09:03 AM AEST
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Hi Lilly,
That was quite surprising and maybe even a little bit disappointing as you turn out not being a cowgirl at all :-)
As for a Dutchie like I happen to be the words "life on a ranch" just make a vague kind of picture from old Country-movies but you describe it quite well. Castrating bulls is something very far away for someone living in Amsterdam. :-)
A beauty, this one, and enjoy your iceream.
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Re: The life for me.
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:31:08 AM AEST
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| This poem really made me laugh. I can see you now on your horse with your lassoo! Yes, I do think your day dreams really cool! |
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Re: The life for me.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 05:01:47 PM AEST
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lilly .. this was so much fun to read. I, too, am glad Ken
inspired it. It has a very smooth rhythm and rhyme to it.
the second stanza is rather scary to me though...
LOL
Great write, lilly!!
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Re: The life for me.
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 01:26:31 AM AEST
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Shame on that cowboy for letting slip on by lilly-
..though I see the silver lining.. in that, you no longer had to castrate bulls.. lol - indeed~
B
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Re: The life for me.
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by maestar on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:12:29 AM AEST
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| Brill, Loved it. |
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Re: The life for me.
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 06:02:23 AM AEST
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Cowboy Ken does have a pen
Who's the cowgirl in the glen?
You had me goin when they captured you,
Can I get some ice cream when your daydreams through?..lol
That was priceless....I just kinda fell into step with you. |
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