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Wars

Contributed by heberbensi on Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 12:18:35 PM in AEST
Topic: political



Wars

The war becomes incandescent the brain,
In the to resound of the myths and legends,
The died appears behind the mirrors...
Saying that in war all lose.

Poets bleed trying to shout,
Expelling messages ignored,
Asking for peace and future,
But to the money the lords point...

And the money points all to the war!

Goldsmithery, how much is this gun?
Why it is in poor countries...
Where food the people can't buy?




Copyright © heberbensi ... [ 2006-09-09 12:18:35]
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Re: Wars (User Rating: 1 )
by Crookedpoet09 on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 02:16:19 PM AEST
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Please don't take this the wrong way because this is the only way I can say it: your poem doesn't make sense. There are a few lines I understand, like the second verse (poets bleed...) but lines such as "the war becomes incandescent the brain"? What is that supposed to mean?


Re: Wars (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 02:38:02 PM AEST
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There are some effective techniques used but the overall sense of the poem doesn't convey a message or understanding to me, keep trying different ways though and it will suddenly just click when you get it right

ShaonKra




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