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Contributed by jmakuer on Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 10:18:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

all this bickering, all the attacks every night
the arguments and the fights, won't make things right
the hurting will only escalate things and make us cry

since it was over, I have been thinking
about the day when you called me and end it
i just have one thing to ask you
i don't care if you have to lie, or tell the truth

when you first said you loved me, did you really mean it
or was that just your way of getting me into you game
was it a trick that you played to me fall for you
or was it really true.

what do you do on your time off?
me i sit up thinking of t hose days together
reminiscing the moments when my body meets yours
the feelings that tingle my spine, the feelings that brought happiness
what do you say about me, what do you think of me
now that you ended it, and set your soul free
left me in darkness and went on to see
what the world has to offer you

can you see? can you feel the blood dripping
can you see my lungs beating against my skin
ripping off my, heart, tearing me upside down
i hope you enjoying your life, i heard you were crowned
so what is it like to be a queen, i wonder how it feels

do you think about me, do you even care anymore
i guess not, you locked me out of your life, you cut me off
no regrets, because all the moments of me and you
paid off, thy gave me a beautiful children
but only had i knew, only had i see n it coming

ooh, life seems pointless without you by my side
four years gone by. there were good, and bitter times
but most were heart wrenching, quite joyful
the sex, the cuddling afterwards, damn, what a day
i just can't take this anymore, its attacking my inner core

it feels like i am nearing, my downfall
so for one last time, if can i just say one thing
its hard to admit it, to spill out, to say it that loud
but, only if you believe me, i just want to say i love
you were my everything, my soul my heart, my life
i guess its too much to say it, but i could careless, as long
as you hear it.

Copyright © jmakuer ... [ 2006-09-08 22:18:19]
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Re: when (User Rating: 1 )
by Marly on Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 01:33:07 PM AEST
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that was perfectly written, I hope your significant other sees this and realizes some things
marly

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